Sample - draft King panda and the flying lizards v2

One morning king panda was making toast and reading the newspaper about
stephen lewis leaving the united nations, when he heard a thud on the
roof of the castle.

He called his guards and went up the roof where they found a balloonist
and his balloon.

A balloonist is someone who controls the balloon, like a pilot flies the
plane

The balloonist introduced himself - my name dodge roger and I have been
sent here as an ambassador of my country Mercah. We are under attack by
giant flying lizards. We have heard of your kingdom and your ability to
help others. I have brought you this giant flying lizards egg as a
present.

So deliberating king panda said he could help and he took a regiment of
his best soliders, and several of his magicians, plus he asked for Neo
to come and bring his magic carpet from the human world.

Deliberating means deciding which way to go is best,

Once Neo arrived everyone boarded the tall ships and sailed for the
balloonist country Mercah, and after sailing for several stormy weeks
they arrived.

After a weeks travel inland King panda meet the council of Mercah during
an aerial bombardment by the lizards dropping rocks which king pandas
troop drove off. They asked about his plan, some were skeptical but most
agreed after seeing his prowess.

The word prowess means he is good at what he does, in this case stopping
the lizards from killing everyone.

So they built a pit and filled it with food, and that night the birds
came and ate the food, and the soldiers went and hid in the nests for
the birds to return. And when the flying lizards came back, Neo and
flying carpet and the balloonists caught the lizards giant net, and the
soldiers and the magicians tied them up, and then king panda went and
talked to the king of the flying lizards.

The king of the flying lizards didn't want to negotiate or share and
king panda showed him that they had to share by helping him realize how
it felt when other people hurt you, and that they could work with the
people, and that the people could feed them if they could bring the
people gold nuggets from the moutains.

Everybody agreed, and eventually the flying lizards and the people
became friends and flew together hunting for gold nuggets to sell and
trade for food.

And king panda went back to his country with lots of presents.

Joshua Paul
Neo Code Software
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